Thursday, March 19, 2009

Making more sense

On your marks, get, set and go
The gunshot seemed to have told us so
We started running our respective run
We were all running the marathon.

Started off the blocks, from the word 'Go'
Rules of the race kept changing though
Laps got added as I ran
Behind me was not a single man.

Running on this track I was the master
But everyone seemed so much faster
Running around was so much ease
But why is everyone ahead please?

High time, I thought, I raised my gear
To a level no one else could bear
But why cannot I go for the kill
Oh am I not running the treadmill!

Woken up thankfully from my dream
On this message light threw its beam
If there's something to make more sense
Only change the frame of your reference.

9 comments:

dilip said...

Good one!!

"Laps got added as I ran
Behind me was not a single man."
Was it a all women's race?? ;-) haha

I really liked the last two lines!! soopeerr..

unknown said...

Lovely poem !
Good to know that it was all a dream.

Anonymous said...

Engaging and Philosophical!

Enigma© said...

I guess that's how life is. But it isn't a dream unfortunately.

Loved the below lines...
Started off the blocks, from the word 'Go'
Rules of the race kept changing though
Laps got added as I ran
Behind me was not a single man.

Sagar said...

@Enigma, thanks for your comments.
@Dilip, Divya & Rachna, belated thanks.

Unknown said...

Very Very true and beautifull said

Sagar said...

@hiteshs: Thanks.

Sagar said...

@Dilip, obviously, if I was the one being chased. :-)

Swati Agarwal said...

Super stuff... a scary race though :)
Was this written on a tiered Friday evening?