Saturday, February 28, 2009

Profound Babble

Not so long ago I stood in a queue
Happy without any hesitation,
Drenched in the rain waited for a train
Always so late at the station,
Times were then slow, oh so mellow
There wasn't a News caused sensation.

Lives now differ, the clocks seem stiffer
That something has caught my attention,
Running a race, getting further into a maze
Now the favoured occupation,
Crime and War, and binging at the bar
Seems to be the state of every nation.

Pondering the case, dizzied by the pace
I sought a doctor's prescription
The doctor's advice, stop running like the mice
You only need bit relaxation
Take the chill pill and pay up the bill
Just forget you had an affliction.

Why pay the bill, doctor making a kill
Is there any justification,
Pay up and you leave, hurry, patients I receive
I am in no better situation,
A costly medicine, but went home with a grin
Impatience wasn't it my creation.


Disclaimer:
The lines that I write, let make your day so bright,
Else the poem has no rhyme or reason

Written entirely in a lighter vein. Not meant to mean much. Thanks for reading through.

4 comments:

dilip said...

Profound it is..
why run in a maze,
putting everything else in a haze..
but also, what is life,
without adding new exciting chapters in ur file,

i wonder,
why the disclaimer..:)

Sagar said...

@dilip:

So much of rage, with much in the page
Only disclaimer caught your attention


You have the experience, here's my 2 pence
Disclaimers have an opposite position

Obviously there was some meaning :-)

unknown said...

A poem on impatience!
Good to enlighten your best relations;
Glad to know it is all your creation :)

Anonymous said...

Ha ha ... a poet is emerging.
Very profound thoughts.Continue the good work.